A tiny door beneath the stairs. A new house full of possibility. A feeling of arriving somewhere unfamiliar and somehow familiar at the same time.
This week’s challenge brought out stories filled with wonder, memory, mystery, and more than a few mice.
Writers were tasked with creating a 100-word Drabble inspired by the image prompt below, and the results turned out charming, heartfelt, eerie, and imaginative in all the best ways.
Which one is your favorite?
Read the stories below, or at the new Flash Fiction Archives.
A quick reminder for transparency: the image was imagined with AI using ChatGPT. If that’s a dealbreaker for you, feel free to skip this one. No hard feelings. Every image prompt in the flash fiction challenge has been AI. I really enjoy creating with AI, but I understand that there are different views. Please keep that in mind and be kind. Recognize that we all have agency to make our own decisions, but that by our nature, we will not all make the same decisions.
Here is this week's image, followed by the stories. Enjoy!
A big thanks to everyone who participated and took on the challenge this week!
Table of Contents
- Not In My House by John Cox
- The Door Beneath the Stairs by Neviena Dēls
- I Remember by Eolas Pellor
- The Big House by Jesse R Traynham - Author
- Little Home by Mary Zuelke Author
by John Cox
Likes: 6
Words: 100
The secret of NIMH was ancient folklore. Mary said she didn't buy a word of it.
Sillyness abounded in the old city. The old ones -some of them claiming to be the ancients themselves- told tales of the the Lab, the Running, and dark sinister characters both human and rat alike.
Well, "I will hear none of it! You have your work. Think of it you hear!" Mary was stern and pointed a paw at the children for good measure.
"To bed now."
The day had become night. Mary pulled the glowing stone from a drawer and held it tight.
by Neviena Dēls
Likes: 5
Words: 100
When Elsie first saw the mice marching from beneath the stairs, she blamed hunger, fever, or grandmother's stories. Five tiny travelers carried cases, bundles, and impossible dignity across the floorboards.
She followed them quietly, past the kitchen light, past her mother's humming, until the smallest mouse paused beside a painted door no taller than her hand. It bowed, opened the latch, and warm firelight spilled across her toes. Elsie looked back once, then stepped through, leaving childhood waiting on the other side for whoever still believed magic required permission, and home required something braver than belief, alone in winter's silence.
Likes: 4
Words: 100
"I can't believe Great-Uncle Milton left us this house," Clarice said. "It's rather like a mansion!"
"It's a welcome change from our old life," said Mother.
"Um. Mother? I don't think we're alone here."
"That so?"
"Did Great-Uncle Milton's will say anything about another family living with us?"
"Maybe. Why do you ask?"
"A whole family of mice just scurried through the tiny door under the staircase."
"That would be the Crumbletons, dear. Uncle Milton knew them from his summer house. They became dear friends."
"So neat! I think I'm going to be great friends with their daughter."
by Eolas Pellor
Likes: 3
Words: 100
“I remember when we were mice,” mother said, as the small family — mother, father, and three children — crept through the door and made their way to the tiny door under the stairs.
I'd never noticed it before, and I watched them carry their bundles within. Inside, I caught a glimpse of a smaller version of our own rooms, with tiny chairs and tables. The mother mouse lit the small lamp before the father mouse closed the door.
“Were we really mice, Mummy?” my sister asked.
“Whenever someone moves to a new place, they start as mice,” Mother replied.
Likes: 2
Words: 100
“The Rodet’s are moving in today.” Mrs. French called from the Kitchen.
Amada sat on the steps, fingers clenched around the baluster as she watched the new neighbors trudging through the living room. “Mama… they’re here.”
Mrs. French hurried from the kitchen wiping her hands on her apron.
“Welcome! We’ve prepared your rooms. Amada’s growing, yet she squeezed in to sweep, dust, and fluffed the pillows.”
Mr. Rodet tipped his hat to Amada.
Mrs. Rodet tittered, her eyes bright. “Oh, it’s so lovely. Thank you, Mrs. French—Amanda. Please meet our younglings, there is Elmer first, then Emma, and Eldritch."
When Colton Travers was just four months old, a runaway horse on Bent Oak Road cause a car wreck that left his mother dead. His father survived, then vanished. Raised on family stories and faded photographs, he never questioned the past . . . until a worn shoe box of old clippings surfaced with hints of a darker truth. Now, drawn into a fifty-year-old unsolved case, Colton must chase a trail gone cold, where memory holds the clues, time keeps the truth, and justice demands satisfaction.
Stargazing at the June Bug Ranch
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