Left Behind

May 29, 2026
Challenge 17
9 stories 9 authors 42 likes 215 avg. words

Prompt
Double Dribble · Exactly 200 words
What the tornado left behind

The Shape of Home

by Neviena Dēls

188 words · 5 likes · Permalink

When the tornado passed, the Harris house stood open to the sky like a cracked egg. Daniel walked through the wreckage at dawn, stepping over soaked insulation and splintered beams while the smell of wet timber clung to the air. He kept expecting grief to arrive all at once, but instead it came in strange pieces: his daughter’s red rain boot hanging from a tree branch, the kitchen clock still ticking beneath broken glass, the family photograph lodged carefully inside a fence post half a block away.

Neighbors wandered the street in stunned silence, carrying armfuls of whatever the wind had spared. Daniel found his wife sitting on the curb with muddy hands wrapped around a dented biscuit tin. Inside were recipe cards written by her mother, the edges curled but readable, and she cried harder for those scraps of paper than for the collapsed house behind them. The storm had taken walls, furniture, photographs, and certainty, yet somehow left the smallest things untouched.

That evening, as generators hummed across the ruined neighborhood, Daniel hammered a crooked sign into the ground beside the rubble. It read: Still here.

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